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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: So Wrong But So Right Chapter 2

    Dear PSouth This is getting more interesting. It is a lot more detailed than your first chapter, and the dialogue is really good, it give the story life. I think ...

    Jan 24, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: So Wrong But So Right

    This is an interesting set up. Can tell it will be an interesting story. The two voices and two perspectives have potential to create a gripping dynamic. I think to ...

    Jan 22, 2009


Poetry is my cheap means of transportation. By the end of the poem the reader should be in a different place from where he started. I would like him to be slightly disoriented at the end, like I drove him outside of town at night and dropped him off in a cornfield.
— Billy Collins